A cluster of brain cells like analog stars.
Poetically unstable, but what can you do?
POETRY
Language formally
Known as language.
STOP HERE
The apple blossoms.
Just spelling it is pleasurable.
Clouds are dust and hydrogen and oxygen.
Where poems hang their garments and solemn as frogs
Reckon the ripples between the stars.
ALL DAY POETRY BLOW OUT SALE!!!
As a child, I sometimes burned vision-like.
Airplanes are mundane.
MOTION
In the passing trees the bicycle hesitates.
LOGIC
I can remember the look of the river with my shoes in it.
A little of this poem
Reminds me of a Tuesday
Afternoon.
I’ve never tangoed, but i’ve seen it on tv dance shows and there seem to be sudden shifts in direction with explosive ends to the moves and then onto something new and it all bleeds together seamlessly. This amazing poem does that Bob. So many favorite lines to choose from here and rather than copying and pasting one, I’m just gonna reread the entire poem and enjoy. I had a great day at work and things just got even better. Have a great night Bob!
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Thank you Steve for the wonderful comment! Enjoy the rest of your day!
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some lovely images here, Bob: the bicycle hesitating between the passing trees, and the look of the river with yr shoes in it; stimulating stuff 🙂
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Thanks John! Glad you liked it.
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So brilliant. There’s a poetic logic here that I love. This poem brought a smile to my face throughout. Well done, Bob!
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Thank you so much!!!
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Yes, I agree with Steve Myers. This one is really special. I love the layout. It’s sensational.
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Thank you Worms! I’m glad you liked it.
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what pause … you display
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Thank you!
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Hi Bob! How lovely to drop by your blog and be greeted with this! The splaying out of thoughts in all directions. It feels like a gust of summer wind letting everything loose. These lines in particular are magical:
“solemn as frogs”
“…I sometimes burned vision-like.”
“ALL DAY POETRY BLOW OUT SALE!!!”
Love the mood and energy of it. Kind of rebellious and playful and deep. Love the title too 🙂
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Thank you Sunra! I was trying to be more playful/different with the form. I’m glad you liked it.
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