Has Always Been Here In Me

As sophisticated as the rain
This simple commotion
Ample in regards to brevity

Staggers like lightning
Down its short fuse
Quickly but I remember

The walking part of the soul
And the distance it must succeed

6 thoughts on “Has Always Been Here In Me”

theusedlife says:

As always, such a pleasure to read. The last two lines have left me with a terrific, lingering feeling. Beautiful.

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April 5, 2020 at 5:39 pm Reply
1. naivehaircuts says:
  
  I’m glad you liked it. That means a lot.
  
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  April 5, 2020 at 7:32 pm Reply
Andy says:

Great line breaks. “Quickly but I remember” is a stellar line.

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April 7, 2020 at 11:21 am Reply
1. naivehaircuts says:
  
  Thanks, Andy!
  
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  April 7, 2020 at 11:33 am Reply
WildHeart says:

Lovely!

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April 8, 2020 at 12:44 pm Reply
1. naivehaircuts says:
  
  Thanks WildHeart!
  
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  April 8, 2020 at 12:53 pm Reply