1. The velocity of a poem-asteroid Is elliptical alliterations. 2. Locals call the moon, Charlie Knuckles, Who brought a fork and spoon into the desert. (Because of this I jumped into the ocean. And took my name from a turn in the road.) 3. The dismal diameter Bleak around No matter how many megaphones Without an atmosphere The moon can't hear what it cannot say 4. Data is finite. 5. And yet, We crossed The sea And found the inaudible Screams of the moon, Buds on spring trees. 6. You were silent all though the movie. Only once, I heard you say, "The crimson sky over the city dump, the cosmonauts are a tree line." You see the wire that holds the celestials, The magnetic ghosts in cubist roller skates.
good one, Bob —
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Thanks John!
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Fascinating word choice and design.
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Thank you! I’m glad you think so.
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Modt welcome. I really do.
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there’s a lot to process here, Bob , but that killer last line !!!
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Thanks John!
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This poem is fun and dynamic. I love the structure. The last section, in particular, is awesome. Great work.
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Thank you, I’m really glad you think so.
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