There is nothing to it, just the celestial waddle, the fathom And its resonations, and me in the field, coming out Just at the rail-lines, to the elm leaves dry In the wind, the insects happenstance to the point of Symphony, there is nothing to it, a sandwich and coffee, A thrift-store shirt, a universe untethered of linguistics, A yellow flower tethered to the sun, the sound of gravel And stones under my shoes, and everywhere Eternity and the void and immanence, Time parceled by our perceptual apparatus, The squeezing out of space in its expansion, The rivals of here and there, the fealty Of wonderous slam-dance-like verse stealing its vistas From the sinewy miles of summer afternoons, to traverse In mass and gravity and beauty and lost and spotting The horizon its distant due, and now the train punching Its own due along the lines and me standing Maybe too close that I feel its force pushing the air Apart, till it is gone and the quite field like an intermezzo, And maybe I’ll go to the movies tonight, afterwards, sit out By the Niagara River and think of the Falls and smoke A joint and just listen to the cricket song.
the sense of immanence suffuses this poem from ‘the universe untethered of linguistics’ to ‘the sinewy miles of summer afternoons’; inspiring —
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Thanks! Turns out you walk enough miles and your legs get the sinewy feel to them.
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yes, I can relate to that —
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A wonderful sense of the infinite, the humdrum and of humility, Bob. John has picked out the same line that really spoke to me too “the universe untethered of linguistics”. Fabulous. But I also love that you ground those amazing concepts with ideas like thrift shop shirts and smoking a joint by a river.
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Thanks! I live about 20 minute walk to the start of the Niagara River and from there it takes about 24 hours for the water to make its way to Niagara Falls. It’s a good place to sit and think. And sometimes partake in a smoke.
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I feel like I’m on a park bench in your mind listening to your inner broadcast of all you see, such amazing and unpredictable imagery and once again, you cover the range, from insects to linguistics to t-shirts. I agree with johnmalone – this is inspiring, almost a reminder to shut off one’s mind and see and feel all that is here, there, and everywhere.
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Thanks! And again I love how you read this. A park bench in the mind. Which is awesome. And the inner broadcast. Which reminds me of how much you love baseball. I guess I’m just trying to connect all the details. Big and small. I’m really glad you like it.
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And you do just that Bob, “connect all the details” which hammers home the reality that staring at a starry sky or painting a wall can both arouse a sense of awe though I find it much harder to feel this as I get older which I guess should and hopefully will inspire me to wake up earlier or stay awake longer, sleep less and get into it all.
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Thanks so much for that, Steve. That means a lot. I agree, it does get harder. Maybe writing is a defense against that.
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Love the reflections on nature. Wish I had your vocabulary. Makes for a refreshing read!
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Thank you, Gordon! Very much appreciated.
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Thank you!
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This is stunning, Bob. I love “ the fealty
Of wonderous slam-dance-like verse stealing its vistas From the sinewy miles of summer afternoons”.
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And maybe I’ll read some of Bob’s poems tonight. Afterwards, sit out by the West River, think of the Atlantic a step away and smoke a joint and just listen to the clouds of geese descending and telling the world and one another… everything there is.
What a wonderful time this evening reading your work Bob. It’s been awhile. You often balance a certain delicacy of detail with the thundering universe and all it holds. With that in mind, I particularly love standing maybe to close to the train and then the quiet and movement that surrounds this moment – incredibly powerful. I could feel it. Take care!
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What a wonderful comment. Like a poem itself. Sitting by the West River, thinking of the Atlantic (it’s been much too long since I’ve been to the ocean), and watching the geese, and the joint… all of it just seems perfect! Thank you so much for reading my poems. It means a lot to me.
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Astounding. I would say this sums up the weirdness of existence in one singular stroll, but that feels clichéd. Your work is seamless and simultaneously effortless.
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