Wind into fire, water into light,
Breath into dust, words into dream.
Comets are not capable of love
Is shortsighted.
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Wind into fire, water into light,
Breath into dust, words into dream.
Comets are not capable of love
Is shortsighted.
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tricky syntax in the second stanza, Bob, but I stood on my head and had another read: yes, it made sense: that comets are NOT capable of love is shortsighted; love the cutting surrealism here —
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Thanks John. I’m glad you pointed that out, cause I thought at first it read oddly too. But I’m glad to did work out. Thanks!!
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I am rowing through the galaxy with you, Bob. And the dark is moving in.
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Thanks. I’m glad for the company!!
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I thought of transformation… how poems and stories show us how things and characters can shift, change, grow. I loved your phrase “words into dream.” But then, being a writer, of course I would love that 🙂
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I just smoked a bowl so I don’t know what I’m thinking, but this is what comes to mind. I’m just thinking now that the word Philosophy sounds good off the tongue and it’s great that in the word is “los” as in loss as in “phi” which translates as fie or fire so if i put 2 and 2 together it equals people lost in a fire, lost in some love like both their brains have been hijacked and so yes, I would argue that comets are in fact capable of love like those butterflies or wolf who meet each other for a short moment and then go on their way.
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Haha! I love the dots you’ve connected there. Loss and love and fire and butterflies and wolves and all like comets, all capable of love. Wonderful!!
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I love the cosmic imagery here. Well done!
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Thanks. Your cosmic collages must be rubbing off on me!
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Haha thanks! And your cosmic poetry on me.
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