22 thoughts on “Poem

  1. Hmmmm, very compelling poem. I like the way it begins and ends with hair, that cosmic nose hair, yes nose hair because I think nose hair like ear lobes never stop growing so even when we’re old and grey, we can be “loose of collar, fixed of spirit” and that inspires…..reminds me that yes, I’m getting older, but there are many more paths to walk……Grandma Moses didn’t start painting until she was like 70 or something.

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    1. Yes, lots of hair after 50. I can’t imagine what would happen if I didn’t keep up on it. Maybe when I’m older, I’ll just let it go. That’s really inspiring with Grandma Moses not starting painting till she was 70. There’s still hope!!

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      1. That darned stuff is god’s joke.

        It’s like he said: You know what would be funny? Let the hair they used to grow on top of their head come out of the orifices instead and let it fall out topside. Hilarious!

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  2. That’s an attention-grabbing first line! Funny where we can go with reading: I thought of an aging rock musician with your poem. The tattoos, T-shirt, spiritedness made me think of a rock musician. And one who can still jam! 🌞

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