On the railroad trestles all over the city is all kinds of graffiti, which inspired me to write a poem: “On a railroad trestle, / Idle words, spray-painted, like falling leaves / Forgotten by guitar.”
Rain puddles make excellent calculators. Indeed, the square root of blue equals eleven triangles. This fact has weight, like the atmosphere. Which we hardly notice. And we should.
On my walks, I am glad to see someone I know. I ask, “How you doing? Everything well? I add, “Glad to see you.” And I mean it. But more often than not, when I am out walking, I’m alone. I like the mornings best. I like Walt Whitman and Federico Fellini. I also like to walk along the Niagara River and to stop and sit and pay attention to the birds. I like to nose around the old industrial sites and look up at the old factory panes or what’s left of them. They look like they haven’t brushed their teeth in four decades and have been chewing on bolts. I enjoy it when the orchestra brings out the percussionist.
I like how you make rain puddles into a mathematical equation.
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Thanks! Yes…it’s a little know fact puddles make excellent calculators. 😊
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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that last paragraph, Bob: so good I’m bppkmarking it —
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Thanks John!!! I really appreciate that. I’m glad to make it the book mark. That puts a smile on my face. 😊
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Weird and beautiful. I love it.
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Thank you!!
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There’s so much in here Bob, the awareness you have and appreciation for all you see is contagious…..I hope so anyway.
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Thanks Steve. I guess as you get older, there seems to be more to appreciate and be aware of. Especially the changing of the seasons.
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God, I sure hope so because I was thinking the opposite the last few days, feeling afraid that I might not be able to see new things and be stuck with an old mind, but then my girlfriend found a new shop to buy kitchen appliances, not exactly a revolution, but a start.
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FABULOUS! I just love this one, Bob. From beginning to end. The poem within the poem. The incredible descriptions. The philosophy. The surreal logic. Really great!
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Thanks so much!!!
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Wonderful. I really like the opening!
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I’m really glad you liked it!!!
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I love the images you’ve presented, especially the factory panes that haven’t brushed their teeth in too long. Your paragraph glow like meteorites and reflect wonders as we gaze into puddles 🌞
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Thanks, Dave! That’s wonderful of you to say. This rustbelt city I live in has lots of old industrial sites. They’re fun to explore.
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Beautiful! Just the right combination of literal and surreal.
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Thank you!
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