When a dream breaks the fourth wall.
Like the footsteps of red autumn leaves
Determined by the wind’s simplicity. At night
So much of what we haven’t done
Lies awake. And wonders. The walker
Visits roam. A ghost spiritually can no longer tie its shoes.
All ghosts have untied shoes.
Which is a tripping hazard when going through walls.
Handwriting is a cosmology,
An archipelago of inklings
Like the orbits of our footprints
As we walk through puddles.
Because the calendar still has one foot in poetry,
Outcomes, whoever simple in the moment,
Over time gain in complexity. The horizon is always
Present-tense,
Yet the clouds like coins
In a time machine.
All ghosts have untied shoes/Which is a tripping hazard when going through walls. 😂
Love it.
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Haha…thanks! Glad the humor came through. 😂
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man, this was awesome, it felt like flying through attics and webs and treasure chests. can see those red leaf footsteps and then a comic arrow, the ghosts untied shoes tripping hazard. classic!! the thing i’ve learned about poetry since reading your blog regularly is the layers involved in a poem, in the many meanings of course but also just the sound. i think that’s why sometimes i read out loud and always super slow.
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Thanks! Glad you liked the tripping line, and it landed well. I think you’re right, poetry is mostly about sound and meaning. I like that. Thanks!
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and it landed!!! Badumpbump. More comic relief.
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Thanks!
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o, this is wonderful , Bob: not sure what t all means —- it is surrealism , after all – but I’m giddy with delight at the imagery ; hang on; in for another read 🙂
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Thanks John! I guess I wasn’t going for too much meaning. Just a lot of fun with the words and imagery. Glad you liked it!! 😊
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I especially love the first 3 stanzas. Soooo cool. But like others, I did chuckle at the ghost tripping over its shoe laces as it navigated walls.
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Thank you. Really glad you liked it. I’m glad the humor came through in that ghost line.
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It’s the fun of letting go, …it definitely shines through, …✨
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Thanks! I agree, sometimes you just have to let it go. Glad you liked it. 😊
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Beautiful poem so emotional 👌👌
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Thank you, Priti! Glad you liked it. .😊
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