22 thoughts on “Poem

  1. that’s such a wonderful idea – beauty starting as an error. i’m reminded of musicians who hear a mistake made in the composition, but follow that mistake and it leads to an entirely new composition. This one flows so nicely and ends with endless possibilities in those open fields.

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    1. Thanks, Steve. I agree. How often, like you said about the musicians, there is a mistake that turns out to be a good idea. Often getting from A to B isn’t a straight line. And that sometimes is for the best.

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      1. looks like the next couple of days are gonna hammer home the zigzag way is the way with all this ice and snow. i love it. the whole world slowed down. schools closed. busses late. everyone pissed off but in the middle of all the misery, there it is…kids playing in the snow, people skiing and the bars are still open or a bar.

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      2. Yes! We’re in the same boat. My work wanted to be open, but realized nothing is plowed, so we’re closed too. We got 18 inches of snow. And it’s beautiful.

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      3. I just looked up the single day record for snow fall in Buffalo: The highest one-day snowfall total in Buffalo, NY, is 33.9 inches, recorded on December 10, 1995.

        The year record is: 188.3 inches – The greatest cumulative snow fall for Buffalo, New York. This occurred during the year that ended December 31st, 2022

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      4. those sink holes are another freak out. i think that’s what they’re called? like when the road just opens up. man thinking about all the ways we could die, anxiety levels spike and makes a beer feel very mentally necessary.

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      5. at some point i guess we just surrender and let go, but the whole insecurity of being alive, knowing all along that suddenly it could be gone and that it might be painful….i don’t know how we all do it, but we do and then being born in north america as opposed to a war place area.

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    1. Thanks, Chris. I agree. Sometimes those mistakes when you’re writing turn out later on to be really interesting. not always. But like you said, those happy accidents are cool when they happen.

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