Something gathers up the guesses,
Stalks the wild throes and strange fits,
Arrives at probability
We pass as answers.
There is the bumble
In the be all of our lives,
The sorrow and the silence of our
Hearts when they are lightest,
And worst and nothing more,
The crumpled sunlight
Passing for debris,
The rubble of stars,
My bare feet.
if i were a born again christian, i’d insist that I know “who gathers up the guesses” and “stalks the wild throes and strange fits,” but i’m not a born again christian, but i have to admit, it would consoling to be one, but i much prefer the third line here – “arrives at probability.”
Side note – I wear long socks because I live in a basement and it’s often cold down here, but after reading the last line, “my bare feet,” I threw away my socks and sipped a little whisky and well, the shitty workday faded and now i feel better.
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Thanks Steve! I prefer probability too. I hear you about the shitty day at work. My day at work was pretty bad as well. Glad you had some whiskey and were able to feel better. Do you see the guy jump on the field at the Brewer’s game? Also, I still have to go through my old cards…maybe this weekend…and see if I have any Brewers.
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no, i didn’t see that guy running onto the field. i wish i would have. i always like seeing a fan outrun security!
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Brilliant!
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Thank you!!
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good one, Bob: I especially love ‘ the bumble in the bee all of our lives’ 🙂
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Thanks John! I like the extra e you added to be. Hmm…that’s got me thinking.
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This is truly beautiful I love the crumpled sunlight and the clever play of bumble and be-all and i love the opening line too. Really lovely.
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Thank you Worms!!!
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All of this is wonderful 👌
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Thanks Sunra!!
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