Will this life be too smooth
Or the rough of happiness
Caught in the throat
Till we too are on our feet
Whispering to stars
~
A few lines
Enjambed on a railroad trestle,
Idle words, spray-painted, like falling leaves
Forgotten by guitar.
~
Dusk hinged to departure.
Everything ducks for cover, including the moon.
Please consult the paperwork, I have been busy
Doodling stanzas, and chasing verses.
Awesome work, as always. “Everything ducks for cover, including the moon.”
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Thank you!!!!
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One of the many things i love about your poetry is the unpredictability, from line to line, every word a total surprise and then when i read the words over a second and third time they make the most beautiful kind of impossible sense like “Idle words, spray-painted, like falling leaves Forgotten by guitar.” As always, great job Bob.
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Thanks Steve! Very much appreciated.
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Wonderful! I especially love the first part. Brilliant.
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Thank you Worms!!
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puzzling and provocative; ‘the rough of happiness’, ‘dusk-hinged to departure’ my favorites —
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Thanks John!!
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always trepidatious approaching your work, but it’s worth the plunge
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Thank you! but why the trepidation?
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trepidatious about having to put the thread down in order to turn the next corner and wondering if I’ll ever find myself out again
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Haha! Thanks m lewis. I like the way you put that very much.
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such a brilliant poem Bob! I especially loved the final stanza, the final two lines so creative!
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Thank you Nolsen! I’m very glad you think so.
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“Dusk hinged to departure” – I love this line. It makes me think of a creaky old gate, a need to make haste, a rising wind, and a feeling of solitude.
For some reason, my account accidentally unfollowed you, God knows why! I have rectified this now 🙂
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Thanks Sunra! Glad to be back!
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