A blue jay
Swirls
A galaxy
Guesses
Likewise
Said the same
The weather
Hypothesizes
The dusk over this city
Is bicycle-blue
Like telepathy
In the wind
And worth running
Away with
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the uncertainty, the never knowing, stands out for me, Bob; the bicycle-blue dusk is a wonderful image and certainly worth running away with/ eloping 🙂
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Thanks, John. I might get on my bike tonight at dusk for a ride. Glad you liked this one.
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I like everything about this and how it all feels on a whim.
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Thanks, Katie. I was hoping for whimsical. So I’m glad you think so. Much appreciated.
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What an amazing and appropriate title!….those last four lines reminds of this guy who always wears an orange ski jacket (doesn’t matter what season) and I see him in various spots in my neighborhood and unlike most people, he’s not in a hurry; he is standing there staring at the scene and maybe reading the wind for a little telepathy action and he comes back for more day after day so it seems like just might be married to the wind. Great job on this Bob.
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The guy in the orange ski jacket seems like my sort of guy. Married to the wind…that’s perfect. Thanks, Steve. I see the Brewers are still leading their division.
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I forget to reply about the Brewers. Yes, holding onto first place, but lost Yelich due to a back problem and aren’t sure when he’s returning. He was a big part of the offense. Either way, always nice to be part of the playoff picture.
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I’m rooting for them. That is a nice feeling, being part of the playoffs.
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Sorry I missed this one, Bob. Haven’t had my glasses nearby my bed (still recovering from the ‘flu) and reading my computer screen has got harder and harder. I read this one once and didn’t fall into it and then I read it again and felt much more moved by it. And then I read Steve’s comment and then read it again. It’s addictive. It’s a circling, a wondering, and a wishing. Really lovely.
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Thanks! I appreciate you gave it a few readings. And I’m glad you liked it. I hope you feel better after the flu.
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Brilliant work! I love “bicycle-blue”, and the last stanza is perfect.
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Thank you!
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