The heart
As flower
Lifting weights.
As moonlight
The heart
Running miles.
Out of breadth
The heart remembering
The years of all the galaxies.
The heart
As sentiment jogging
If the universe is in a major
Or minor key.
The heart
As flower
Lifting weights.
As moonlight
The heart
Running miles.
Out of breadth
The heart remembering
The years of all the galaxies.
The heart
As sentiment jogging
If the universe is in a major
Or minor key.
Love the first two stanzas especially.
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Thanks! I did some editing and tried to make the last two stanzas more like the first two.
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My universe currently is totally offkey… 🙂 I love that the heart lifts weights like a flower… so true!!!
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Haha. I think lots of us are living in off key universes. Thanks!
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sorry Bob: I just didn’t ;get’ this one 😦
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No worries. I appreciate your honesty. I went back and tried to make it work a little better. Still think it needs some edits.
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After reading the title and the first lines about the heart flower lifting weights reminds me of the pastime of thinking and knowing that it is very much exercise. You take it to another level Bob with the heart and the weight that love can cause, a heaviness followed by a lightness, then a heaviness and so on see-saw the heart.
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Thanks Steve. I went back and tried to tidy this one up a bit. I agree, this one was about thinking as exercise and trying to look at things that aren’t easy to wrap your head around. Still might needs some more work.
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It’s strange that some people see meditation or sitting around and thinking as lazy. I forget what book I was reading (maybe Escape From Freedom by Erick Fromm), but the author emphasized that thinking is absolutely exercise, a gift given to us humans.
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I agree. Sometimes I just like to sit in quiet.
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I gotta get me one of those Buddha statues with him and his big belly smiling eternal! I think they have him in China town here. When it gets a little warmer, I’ll head over there. Holy crap is it cold today. I walked for like 30 minutes and got what my brother calls “the booger freeze.”
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They just kicked us out of work. Blizzard conditions. Not a good day for a walk.
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It looks like we have one more “booger freeze day” as my brother likes to say and then the temperature will rise a bit. I’m looking forward to it.
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I saw a trailer for a movie called Eephus. I thought you might like it. Today’s our last really cold day too.
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Thanks Bob. I just checked out the preview and it looks very unique, interesting and what not and former pitcher eccentric Bill Lee is in it. I hope it comes to the theaters here. I haven’t been to a movie house in a long time. Have a great day! Stay warm.
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I hope it comes to theaters here too. Though I doubt it cause Buffalo usually doesn’t get openings for smaller movies. But I will look for it when it streams.
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I like all the movie channels on tv now or smart tv’s, but I also remember asking Sarah Western to see a James Bond movie at the local movie house which turned out to be a mistake because after the movie, us outside in the summer whatever sky and I felt like a loser in comparison to Bond and because of that macho Bond stuff and stupid me I never took the dive into saying something romantic and inching over for a kiss which was doubly stupid on my part because Sarah wasn’t a snob, not at all……I was just too shy. Dammit.
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I agree, there’s something about going to the movies, the dark, the sound, the popcorn. I can’t tell you how many times I was to shy to try something romantic.
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I often daydream of a spontaneous kiss with a stranger in a bus cabin, but it never happens and more likely, metaphorically is the puddle splashing my paints, but love is worth it and though i sound like a Levi’s commercial, it’s true on my deathbed that love is worth it.
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I agree. Love is worth it.
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You inspire me to start writing poetry again. Brilliant work, Bob!
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Thank you. That’s wonderful of you to say.
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