Trains and electrical towers buzzed in his head. The locomotive is a moth that drinks only from puddles that harbor the reflection of the moon.
And the moth, now a locomotive again, falls into the reflection of the moon.
Later that night, neither the rain nor the rain against the windowpane make a sound. It is the tree roots drinking, it is the roots of stars drinking. That resonate.

This is beautiful!!!
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Thank you!
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the pic and the first stanza are eerily evocative; the line of logic thereafter becomes a little entangled for me —
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Thanks, John. I’ve sat on this one for a while, and tried several incarnations. It might resurface again after some more editing. It does get a little entangled.
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Lovely poem. I can picture the night and the reflection of the moon.
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Thanks, Diana!
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i like electrical towers even though they might be dangerous. these ones look like they are ready to start doing a dance boogie or a wild west shoot out. either way, it’s exciting.
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Thanks, Steve! I took the pic. It’s one of the routes I take on walks. Along the tracks.
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railroad tracks seem to be part of a mythology, a new one that hasn’t been registered at the local mythological center…..so much industry and hobo-ism and all in between these tracks.
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I agree. Railroad tracks have always had a mythology to them. I wonder if anyone has every written about walking along them. I’m sure someone has.
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that makes me think of the neil cassady end of his life mythology, that he just conked out on the tracks in mexico like a locomotive that ran out of fuel. but i don’t think he was keeping a journal at the time so now that you mention it, you could write a series of railroad track poems book.
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Fantastic. This poem makes the everyday feel magical.
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Thank you!
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This is astonishing. I might include it in an anthology of “walk poems”–a subgenre with many illustrious examples.
I covet your beautiful walking place. (Maybe you’ll find Neal Cassady’s corpse sprawled on the tracks.) I used to live a stone’s throw from a rail trail; it was a great place to walk my dog. But now I have to drive to a good walking place.
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Thanks! And crazy as this sounds, I was obsessed with Kerouac in my early 20’s. And I did go down to Mexico, to San Miguel de Allende, where supposedly Cassady died on the tracks. I did go walking on some tracks there, but never sure if it was those tracks.
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Oh, man, I envy you that experience. I would’ve lain on the tracks and played dead and stiffened to look as if I’d died of exposure. Then I would’ve asked someone to snapshoot me. Caption: “reenactment of Neal Cassady’s death on the exact spot where he died.”
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I was a lot younger. I went down to Mexico for a few months. It was great. And potentially to have walked the same tracks as Cassady was special. I was alone, so I couldn’t get a photo. Would have been great!
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Bob,
I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award: https://ravensweald.com/sunshine-blogger-award/
Up to answering some silly questions?
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Thanks Michael!!!! That’s really nice of you. Just let me know what I need to do. 😊
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Follow the link. The rules are there. Or be a rebel and put up pictures of dancing bears instead 🐻 🤪
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Sounds good. Thanks.
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