Poems are immaterial music.
If laid on the floor become trapdoors.
Each dream is specifically unreal
And every unreal is true too.
The spring sun is a spelling error,
A pantheist without a paycheck.
And it’s pancakes and karate chops
That resurrect the day.
Love the second line!
Very nice poem. I’m going to write it on the wall of the men’s room at the IHOP–International House of Pantheists.
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“A pantheist without a paycheck.” Oh, I love this notion.
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Incredibly strong line: If laid on the floor become trapdoors.
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Great work! I’ll second all the comments above.
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brilliant, Bob. THis is loony but I like it. Bookmarking tis. It is vintage !!!
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