Observed and Unobserved
Someone graffitied
The interference pattern from the double slit
Experiment on the brick wall behind the bus
Stop. Where would we be without earthworms?
Making it Work
What it lacked in finesse
It made up for in repairs
And though now it slants
“Only slightly” to the side
A rollicking wonderment
Tumbled into form
Like the misshapen poem
Whose aim is true
These are both beautifully surreal. Your poetry is always such a pleasure to experience. Great work, Bob!
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Thank you!!! ☺️
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great stuff as always. Truly, where would we be without earthworms? I also love “misshapen poem”
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Didn’t realize I was signed out!
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Thanks!! I agree, earthworm, cause we don’t often see them, are under appreciated. They give us soil.
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Great stuff, Bob. Both have great turning phrases at the end 🙂
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Thanks Michael!!! ☺️
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Both are wonderful! I love the misshapen poem line.
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Thanks Diana!!
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love that ‘misshapen poem whose aim is true’ : would love to read one of these; would like even more to write one of these — but what would a ‘misshapen poem’ look like ?
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Great question John. I was thinking one that didn’t work out at the beginning, but sticking with it, in the end came together. Which could be a metaphor for people too?
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There’s such a daredevil leap in the last lines of the first poem, bam, right into the necessity of earthworms. Unpredictable right there. Excellent! And the second one, freaking inspiring like a spider on the side of a bathtub crawling up, but keeps falling to the bottom, but keeps crawling to the top or trying to and they have an advantage over us – spinning webs.
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Thanks Steve. I love the spider metaphor. That’s it. The little spider not giving up and making that beautiful web.
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OMG… “The interference pattern from the double slit” Thanks for appreciating physics!!
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Thanks! I may not understand physics, but I am forever fascinated by its discoveries. The double slit experiment…wow, that one hurts the head to think about.
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